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Aside of the technical aspects, this poem was very moving
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 26, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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Re: U r on a roll, merk..delightful poetry! - Ash
Thank you so much Ash...glad you like !
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thanks Troosha You think amazing things to share!
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Re: soulbuilder101
Thanks Dave
posted by
merkie
on November 22, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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U r on a roll, merk..delightful poetry! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 22, 2008 at 7:41 AM
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Merkie
Pearl wings of morning sunlight – damn… wish I had thought of that fabulous line! 
What a beautiful snapshot of morning!
posted by
Troosha
on November 22, 2008 at 6:48 AM
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Quite a nice style! Great!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 21, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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Re: Re: wigopa
Certianly
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 21, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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Re: Very Nice
Thank you Kolekushuns, I will watch for it. Let me know how it goes! blood sweat and tears LOl
posted by
merkie
on November 21, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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Re: Yellowrose55
Thanks Vicky Enjoy some peace and treat yourself well
add chocolate!!!
posted by
merkie
on November 21, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Very Nice
Thank you. I might try this myself.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 21, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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This is the kind of morning I'm ready for, on my day off - the kind where I don't get out of bed until sunrise.
Your poem put me there...in that wonderful morning.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 21, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Re: sam444
Thanks Shelly I find iambic pentameter too difficult to use very much too. I hope it was OK Rhythm is important! Thanks so much!
posted by
merkie
on November 21, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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Re: you just proved that poetry doesn't have to be epic
Hi Mike Thanks for visiting!I am glad you like !
posted by
merkie
on November 21, 2008 at 5:35 PM
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Re: wigopa
Thanks Marion. See you next time!
posted by
merkie
on November 21, 2008 at 5:34 PM
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Outstanding! I loved the imagery! I am working with a little iambic pentameter myself now! It is not my favorite but I am still writing it! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 21, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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you just proved that poetry doesn't have to be epic
to be beautiful. i loved it
posted by
muley12
on November 21, 2008 at 1:12 PM
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Completely stunning work!!! Loved it!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 21, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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