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Poignant verse! Very well conceived and the delivery is outstanding! It speaks volumes! Peace and blessing! Shelly

posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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It seems to be the old addage-'we live and learn' mariaki-for many of us!
very well written! So long as there IS something GOOD-to remember? Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 20, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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I have some vivid memories
but am already looking forward to those I'll create tomorrow
posted by
malcolm
on November 20, 2008 at 12:03 PM
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Totally realistic! I guess that total open-ness is a pre-requisite for success in relationships. Sadly, this is impossible when there's a lot of baggage!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 20, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Very emotional.
I can relate to this. Thanks
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 20, 2008 at 8:36 AM
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wonderfully written
so expressive that it took me back to the end of several relationships
posted by
lionreign
on November 20, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Mariaki
Been through many a relationship when once the surface was scratched it seemed to lack substance. I’m happy now though and with a man who seems to march to the same drummer.
posted by
Troosha
on November 20, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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you are exactly right......
posted by
Star5_
on November 20, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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I HOPE THERE ARE SOME YOU CAN CHOOSE TO KEEP, LOVE THE QUOTE BY YOGI, HE HAD A WAY WITH WORDS, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 20, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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