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Poignant verse! Very well conceived and the delivery is outstanding! It speaks volumes! Peace and blessing! Shelly

posted by sam444 on November 20, 2008 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

It seems to be the old addage-'we live and learn' mariaki-for many of us!
very well written! So long as there IS something GOOD-to remember? Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 20, 2008 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

I have some vivid memories
but am already looking forward to those I'll create tomorrow

posted by malcolm on November 20, 2008 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

Totally realistic! I guess that total open-ness  is a pre-requisite for success in relationships. Sadly,  this is impossible when there's a lot of baggage!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on November 20, 2008 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very emotional.
 I can relate to this.  Thanks Flower

posted by Kolekshuns on November 20, 2008 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

wonderfully written
so expressive that it took me back to the end of several relationships

posted by lionreign on November 20, 2008 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Mariaki
Been through many a relationship when once the surface was scratched it seemed to lack substance.  I’m happy now though and with a man who seems to march to the same drummer.

posted by Troosha on November 20, 2008 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

you are exactly right......

posted by Star5_ on November 20, 2008 at 6:10 AM | link to this | reply

I HOPE THERE ARE SOME YOU CAN CHOOSE TO KEEP, LOVE THE QUOTE BY YOGI, HE HAD A WAY WITH WORDS, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 20, 2008 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply