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Goes back to ignorance is bliss? You have me thinking about monotony. Not very blissful
posted by
merkie
on November 23, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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I could go for a little bliss myself! Your poetry is so laden with wisdom! It has been a treat to read so many at a time! Where is your book? Peace and blessings to you in your sunny paradise Mariaki! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 10:19 PM
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Yes, a bubble ...
... maybe it would be fine to live like it ... maybe it's afterlife you describe ... if so, I understand this fight, injustice and violence we have to face in our world for learning - to learn what we have to bury.
What you describe wouldn't be possible to know if we hadn't experienced the oposite ... that's maybe what this life is about ?
... or maybe you just jump about in a start of a fairytale ? - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 19, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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OK once in a while mariaki but I would not like to be in such a controlled
environment myself! A thought provoking piece-very well written! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 19, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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You describe a lovely utopia love 
posted by
BC-A
on November 19, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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So profound and wise post ...
posted by
afzal50
on November 19, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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Much of it sounds perfect
but I would miss challenge and the spur to grow - what lessons can be learnt in the perfect society?
posted by
lionreign
on November 19, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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Thank you
Nice poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 19, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Quite thought inducing!
I just wished the very worst elements of evil could be removed; but I agree, no contrasts, no challenges, no chaos of any kind would equal boredom..:)
posted by
Katray2
on November 19, 2008 at 7:14 AM
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Re: Ideally
Hello there and welcome! Actually that was the whole point - all the things we complain about but can't live without! Although I have to agree it would be a place to retreat to now and again; thanks again for visiting much appreciated
posted by
mariaki
on November 19, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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beautiful!
posted by
Star5_
on November 19, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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Ideally
As wonderful as that sounds, I know I would get bored!. *laughing* The challenges in life are good. (i guess). I just wish I had a place like this to go to for a reprieve now and then. :)
posted by
Imaginerain08
on November 19, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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Ideally
As
posted by
Imaginerain08
on November 19, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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Nice world...where do I find it? lol
posted by
Ariala
on November 19, 2008 at 5:53 AM
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SOME THOUGHTS TO PONDER, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 19, 2008 at 5:49 AM
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