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Re: Sinome
Muchly appreciated Marta dear.
posted by
merkie
on November 20, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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Hey comments are not finished :-) These two poems are great. Loved the succinctness of the first one... and the "to the point" manner in which you wrote it. The Haiku was great...Excellent work Margaret... :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 19, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Thank you to each of you for your kind comments!
posted by
merkie
on November 19, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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Awesome
I especially love the image of the stars breathing...
posted by
lionreign
on November 19, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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beautiul!
posted by
Star5_
on November 19, 2008 at 6:17 AM
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A perfect pair - really lovely my dear!
very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 19, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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very sensible poem,..
the haiku reminds me of my childhood.
posted by
zhemarie
on November 19, 2008 at 5:26 AM
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Very Nice!
Thanks!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 18, 2008 at 11:50 PM
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Thank you ladies! wigopa,Shelly,and Chris.
posted by
merkie
on November 18, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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I agree with Scramble and Sam...Wonderful work the both of them..Just awesome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 18, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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Chris said exactly what I was thinking! Can't improve on it! Well done indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2008 at 4:33 PM
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Absolutely Beautifull merkie! Both of these.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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