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A beutiful expression

posted by mariss9 on November 23, 2008 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Expressive...shadows of thought! Smooth and rich! sam

posted by sam444 on November 18, 2008 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful, bravo my friend

posted by Smittenheimer on November 18, 2008 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful, Merkie!
Hopefully it always shall..

posted by Katray2 on November 18, 2008 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

That's an excellent one merkie! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 18, 2008 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

fabulous!
very good way of putting it.

posted by lionreign on November 18, 2008 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

Indeed it does
Our problems occur when we can't see the light, or perhaps we choose not to?

posted by malcolm on November 18, 2008 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent job!
most well done; I like very much; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on November 18, 2008 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and well done! 

posted by TAPS. on November 18, 2008 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Thought provoking words! great!

posted by rubypoem on November 18, 2008 at 3:17 AM | link to this | reply

I loved this Haiku!!!  just loved it... so poignant and meaningful.  Great job!

posted by Sinome on November 17, 2008 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: hardialziz
Thank you so much!

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Too good. You have the skill to create picturesque scenes.

posted by hardilaziz on November 17, 2008 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: yellowrose55
You are so kind thank you Vicky!

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I liked that one!
Thank you Shelly b.

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

A lovely haiku with a wonderful message.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 17, 2008 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

I liked that one!

posted by shelly_b on November 17, 2008 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: jfm32
Thanks John. Your comments are priceless! I enjoy reading them as you comment on other poets as well. Guru of thought!

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: EX TURPI
Thank you LesT

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Hey, what you trying to do--bribe my mind with minimalization?... And now I have to have quiet time with this thought.

posted by jfm32 on November 17, 2008 at 4:00 PM | link to this | reply

So clearly stated; so true.

posted by EX_TURPI on November 17, 2008 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply