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This was extremely precious and flowing.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 20, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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Sinome
This was beautiful.....but so melancholy to me, and I know it is full of hope so I don't really know why it strikes me so...... Anyway, there are no new ways to tell you how very excellent your pieces are....so, "Ditto"
posted by
Krisles
on November 18, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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I liked we will go to the light together but I thought this was astonishing:
It is enough to see the light, though dim, is still alive
and flickers in your eyes, so beautiful, so sad,
for one small spark is all we need to build the raging flame
which makes us live and love again
Just beautiful sweetie! sammy 
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2008 at 2:38 PM
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Sinome this is such a BEAUTIFLL piece! What a loving-tender Soul you are!
Thank you for sharing a part of your world that must be so painfull for you to dwell in! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 7:24 AM
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That's a mighty big "if", Sinome, but one worth striving for. Beautiful thoughts, beautiful committment.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 18, 2008 at 12:43 AM
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Love comes in many forms, shapes, sizes, colors, etc., changing constantly, throughout time evolving, you seem to know it well, love that is.... I love the last line in this poem, it just says it all.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 17, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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Very beautiful thoughts
posted by
mariss9
on November 17, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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Grand poetry a la empress Sinome :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 17, 2008 at 10:07 AM
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Beautiful
and heartfelt words. You must feel really drained after writing verse like this?
posted by
malcolm
on November 17, 2008 at 9:58 AM
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MAN , WHERE DO I START? THERE ARE ENOUGH GREAT LINES IN THIS FOR A HUNDRED POEMS, THIS IS JUST TOO FANTASTIC TO DECRIBE, I MUST GO READ IT SOME MORE, THANKS FOR THIS MASTERPIECE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 17, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Sinome
They are all so very special,like this;and I agree 'love is too strong a living force'. Wiley and Kabu 
"For love is too strong a living force
to stand behind the rigid wall of sickness and dwell there,
there amidst neglected hope and unfed dreams,
abandoned touch and silence full of muffled wailing"
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 17, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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The spirit of sacrifice comes out loud and clear. The lines on growing within each other's shadows are special.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 17, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Love your expressions. This one was special because you revealed the spirit of sacrifice. The lines...
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 17, 2008 at 6:53 AM
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Sinome
“If I can make that spark into a fire” – sounds like a lot of work to me. Love shouldn’t require one person doing that much work or giving up of themselves in order for it to thrive (though, as women, we often think along these lines…). I have come to learn that love is a mutual endeavour and both people have to keep the fire going. I enjoyed your analogy of love being like two eagles flying – “never beyond each other’s sound”. That was great!
posted by
Troosha
on November 17, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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I have the flame but where is the kindling
posted by
Lanetay
on November 17, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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Sweet and touching ,I am inspired by your wonderful expressions !
posted by
afzal50
on November 17, 2008 at 4:02 AM
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Where there is a spark my dear Sinome
there is a very good chance for the fire to rekindle and then that spark means that there is always hope; excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks - have a great week ahead
posted by
mariaki
on November 17, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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Brava! ...sweet poet!
...you words give me hope.. that it will be different this time...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 17, 2008 at 1:06 AM
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If we could only turn the spark into flame again out from behind the illness. If only! Sad sweet hearted poetess. Inspiring with hope.
posted by
merkie
on November 16, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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amazing, simply amazing....I found myself daydreaming of what that would be like.....just amazing...thank-you...
posted by
banzonvilla
on November 16, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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