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It might be titled Stale but I found great hope in the closing couplet:
The hope of better times
Full of passion words and rhymes Truly wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 19, 2008 at 4:56 PM
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Life is so routine for most people...
...the challenge is in finding ways to spice it up.
Your poem excellently relates the monotony of everyday life.
posted by
metalrat
on November 17, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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Honest, raw and warm... I like your style.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 17, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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Beautiful words...beautiful !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on November 17, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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So relatable..Excellently conveyed..
posted by
Katray2
on November 17, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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Poignant and drenched in hidden feelings. One of the best of yours I have read so far :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 16, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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