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It might be titled Stale but I found great hope in the closing couplet: The hope of better times
Full of passion words and rhymes
Truly wonderful! sam

posted by sam444 on November 19, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Life is so routine for most people...
...the challenge is in finding ways to spice it up.
Your poem excellently relates the monotony of everyday life.

posted by metalrat on November 17, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Honest, raw and warm... I like your style.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 17, 2008 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful words...beautiful !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on November 17, 2008 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

So relatable..Excellently conveyed..

posted by Katray2 on November 17, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant and drenched in hidden feelings.  One of the best  of yours I have read so far :-)

posted by Sinome on November 16, 2008 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

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