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for it has the silver blue hue in your honey colored eyes, what an awesome metaphor! I thought this was a great depiction of the frustration and successes of the painter. Such awesome insight as well. Love you mucho! sammy 
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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This is absolutely beautiful, Sinome.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 18, 2008 at 12:32 AM
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..this really moves me...
...I am an artist... Ive done drawing and paintings of loved ones.. and given them away as tokens of love... I've often wondered what ever happened to them all...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 17, 2008 at 1:04 AM
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This is a beautiful narrative, very well done and kept me reading until the last. You have a gift.
posted by
robinrn
on November 16, 2008 at 2:17 PM
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Wonderful narrative. Was wondering where it was going till I got touched at the end, A bittersweet insight into the beauty of life.
posted by
jfm32
on November 16, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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Sinome this is beautifull and brought each of the words you wrote into
the 'visual'! Wonderfull work! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 16, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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sweetheart,
I AM SO PROUD OF YOU! saw your ranking just now and I am so thrilled and elated. Bravo! Congratulations dear...I'll always be around...for you and those who believe....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on November 16, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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Sinome
An extremely intoxicating write, Sinome. One could almost read into it a min-biography of any number of the famous impressionists but you kept returning your reader to the personal nature of the story and the characters. Beautifully done!
posted by
Troosha
on November 16, 2008 at 6:50 AM
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Artists on artists
and real artistry here. I loved it.
posted by
malcolm
on November 16, 2008 at 5:29 AM
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The memory of that smile
Some of the lines reminded me of myself.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 16, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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Enchanting tale of true love Poignant and painted with the vision of a true artist. Bravo!
posted by
merkie
on November 15, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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Oh my, this is so wonderful....so rich....so full......you have such a rich inner life and we are so blessed that you share it with us....thank you. I really.....really.....love this.
posted by
Krisles
on November 15, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read
A love that lasts forever not only on a canvas but forever from the astral plane the inspiration came. The light of love seen in your eyes is beyond description of how he saw the love that vibrated and glowed from the vision that flowed through him. A love so few know.
posted by
skye08
on November 15, 2008 at 5:16 PM
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very nice story
posted by
Lanetay
on November 15, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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