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I did a drawing about that one time...
..how some memories are as perminate as a tatoo.. very nice
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 15, 2008 at 1:56 AM
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Wonderful images of love.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 14, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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A very romantic place. How could a girl say no?
posted by
TAPS.
on November 14, 2008 at 3:29 AM
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sinome........precious feelings
posted by
Star5_
on November 13, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Memories always remain somewhere in our minds
posted by
Lanetay
on November 13, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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Sinome
This is almost overwhelmingly beautiful and poignant...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 13, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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Sinome A straight Poet nothing but
posted by
lestate7
on November 13, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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how romantic. how touching.
posted by
muley12
on November 13, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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A beautiful memory to treasure and I love the undying commitment! The imagery is fabulous! Just when I think you have captured the essence of everything around your aura you never cease to astound me with poignant and fulfilling imagery! It is an honor to be able to read your work my darlin' Sinome! PLUTO! plus infinity, plus your infinity and retro to before the beginning! Top that one Darlin'! Sammy loves you!
posted by
sam444
on November 13, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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Such a special memory. Lasting with romance.
posted by
merkie
on November 13, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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what a beautiful memory , may it never fade, thanks kent
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 13, 2008 at 10:41 AM
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..do you remember how softly you were kissing me goodbye?
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 13, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Sinome-everything is 'magical' 'neathe the Moon and the Stars-wonderfull!
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 13, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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Thank you Sinome
for taking us through to your magical moment via your excellent imagery; most beautifully done; many blessings and thanks again
posted by
mariaki
on November 13, 2008 at 7:06 AM
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Sinome
Be it under the moon or beneath the sun when we say “sure” can be a magical moment and one which is indelibly stamped upon our hearts forever…. You took me there to your moment….
posted by
Troosha
on November 13, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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Picturesque sweet memory ...
posted by
afzal50
on November 13, 2008 at 3:38 AM
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This is not fiction
The imagery are real, I can almost see you two becoming one silhouet in the monlight. You do bring back my own memories of moonlights and shadows in the night . . . Rotsen
posted by
Rotsen
on November 13, 2008 at 2:01 AM
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so pretty....
posted by
Star5_
on November 13, 2008 at 12:10 AM
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The subject matter
Very moving. In good way. Exactly what I would Love to hear someday. I want to read it again.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 12, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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You're painting a picture -- very nice!!
posted by
jefco
on November 12, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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"
No matter what turn life takes" is a most memorable ending that will remain etcherd in the minds of your readers, and especially when the poem is about one's poignant journey down memory line. That is the stuff what the princess of the ocean kissed sands are made of. xoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 12, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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So very, very beautiful
You write such beautiful poems.
posted by
skye08
on November 12, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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