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Thanks everyone!
Thank you all for being such a supportive, helpful, and friendly online family!

posted by Luz_Briar on November 13, 2008 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

This is very cool! So ice to be reading another story! Let's see what you have this time! I am ready! YOu are an excellent story teller too! sam

posted by sam444 on November 12, 2008 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

Luz, nicely set up..I smell trouble ahead....:)
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posted by Rumor on November 12, 2008 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

such creataivity and imagination
I love the names of the characters and how my brain paints them in my mind....

posted by mysteria on November 12, 2008 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Your gift with prose
is rampant again... I am captured

posted by lionreign on November 12, 2008 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

You really do have a
captivating writing style.

posted by malcolm on November 12, 2008 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: hey dear
hello

posted by Luz_Briar on November 11, 2008 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

hey dear

posted by Star5_ on November 11, 2008 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply