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LOL Teddy,
Thanks. Um, yeah, she takes up a lot of my time but I have a few brewing in my brain. Hope to get them typed up before they're gone! Thanks for reading this!
posted by
SpitFire70
on January 4, 2009 at 5:52 PM
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Beautiful, my friend...I thought that I had commented on this long ago...
my apologies for the late comment on such grand words...I know she is pleased. Are you going to write more or is the young Lady getting the best of her old Mum?
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM
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Thank you so very much, Mystereo
posted by
SpitFire70
on December 15, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Awsome! Diamonds for shinning of honor in words form for a mother.
I truely thank you for this read, I write about my mother often too. Mystereo.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 15, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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calia 14,
Thank you very much. Thanks for reading this.
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 29, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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Very moving piece, I'm sorry for your loss.
posted by
calia14
on November 29, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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Thank you, Katray
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 26, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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So poignant and touching, Dear Spitfire..
posted by
Katray2
on November 26, 2008 at 5:56 PM
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Oh, thanks, Lovelylady!!
So sweet of you
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 19, 2008 at 5:08 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on November 19, 2008 at 2:33 PM
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Aww, merkie,
I know. I'm sorry to hear that. It's never easy, is it?
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 16, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Moms leave an empty hole in your heart when they are gone. Its almost 20 years and I still miss my Mom.
posted by
merkie
on November 13, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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Ex Turpi,
I'm so sorry for your loss and I agree. It's never easy, especially when you were so close to the one you lost.
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 12, 2008 at 6:13 PM
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Wow, Sam...
That really means so much! Thank you!
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 12, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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I know what mothers mean; I know how you feel. I lost mine long ago, too long ago. The pain never ebbs.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 11, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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Oh my, how wonderful of a tribute. I was so taken with this line:
There’s only so much sadness my essence can take It means so much more now I have finished the poem. This is magnificent! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 10, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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Sir Strat,
Thank you, my friend.
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 10, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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BC-A,
Thank you. I hope you don't feel them "personally" tho!
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 10, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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demultiflex,
Thank you so much for your words.
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 10, 2008 at 12:43 PM
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Thanks 9star
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 10, 2008 at 12:42 PM
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posted by
strat
on November 10, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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I feel your words*
posted by
BC-A
on November 10, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Heart moving piece
As humans our parents are our prize possession. I feel for you, and I'm sorry about your mother. May you find comfort in another. Though, I know there is no substitute.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 10, 2008 at 3:13 AM
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very good
posted by
Star5_
on November 9, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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