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Hands down! What beautiful poem, so direct straight threw the heart. Awsome

posted by Mystereo on January 7, 2009 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful, Shamasehar.  Definitely a keeper. 

posted by TAPS. on November 11, 2008 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

very nicely written....

posted by Star5_ on November 9, 2008 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

This poem has good rhythm, which I felt as it continued to wash over me
as I approached its end. There was a time delay that put me, as reader, into two places simultaneously near the end. It was a sort of "out of body" experience. Spooky and delicious!

posted by WindTapper on November 9, 2008 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

~Peace, OTA

posted by Blue_feathers on November 9, 2008 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful...

posted by Star5_ on November 9, 2008 at 2:22 AM | link to this | reply

Such exquisite imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on November 8, 2008 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

What a beatiful poem painted with shamashehar (dOllY) thoughts. Bravo!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 8, 2008 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

A WARM HEART MELTS TO TAKE REFUGE IN A TEARDROP, I LOVE THIS LINE, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 8, 2008 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

 A gaurdian angel to guide and the awareness intrigues me.Bravo

posted by merkie on November 8, 2008 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

Profound and superb .....

posted by afzal50 on November 8, 2008 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Profound and superb .....

posted by afzal50 on November 8, 2008 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem, full of meaning and beautiful verses.  Loved it!

posted by Sinome on November 8, 2008 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply