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Hands down! What beautiful poem, so direct straight threw the heart. Awsome
posted by
Mystereo
on January 7, 2009 at 3:49 PM
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This is beautiful, Shamasehar. Definitely a keeper.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 11, 2008 at 1:42 PM
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very nicely written....
posted by
Star5_
on November 9, 2008 at 6:36 PM
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This poem has good rhythm, which I felt as it continued to wash over me
as I approached its end. There was a time delay that put me, as reader, into two places simultaneously near the end. It was a sort of "out of body" experience. Spooky and delicious!
posted by
WindTapper
on November 9, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 9, 2008 at 4:16 AM
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beautiful...
posted by
Star5_
on November 9, 2008 at 2:22 AM
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Such exquisite imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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What a beatiful poem painted with shamashehar (dOllY) thoughts. Bravo!

posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 8, 2008 at 5:43 PM
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A WARM HEART MELTS TO TAKE REFUGE IN A TEARDROP, I LOVE THIS LINE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 8, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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A gaurdian angel to guide and the awareness intrigues me.Bravo

posted by
merkie
on November 8, 2008 at 1:40 PM
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Profound and superb .....
posted by
afzal50
on November 8, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Profound and superb .....
posted by
afzal50
on November 8, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Great poem, full of meaning and beautiful verses. Loved it!
posted by
Sinome
on November 8, 2008 at 6:57 AM
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