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Merkie, this was a powerful and moving moonlit sun shadowed poem
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 11, 2008 at 12:36 PM
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Re: sam444
Thank you Sam. Inhibitions sometimes hold back expression. Words are so powerful and reveal more subtleties than we expect.
posted by
merkie
on November 9, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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My favorite line:
Hiding in the shadow of the Sun you know she laughs at you. In the shadows of the sun is so striking! This is an excellent piece! It has a lot going for it! The imagery is very captivating! I read twice because I knew there was a ton in it! I am sorry I get behind on reading your work. My headaches have been quite troublesome of late! Thank you for visiting me! I will always get by your site eventually! Shelly
I saw what Sinome wrote and I agree you are growing tremendously as a poetess!
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2008 at 11:34 PM
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Thank you everyone who read and gave such great comments.
posted by
merkie
on November 8, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Gorgeous
and mysterious
posted by
malcolm
on November 8, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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Merkie
The continuous dance between moon and sun.... beautifully done!
posted by
Troosha
on November 8, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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Excellent! outstanding visual effects.
posted by
shamasehar
on November 8, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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A real poet
I like the way you describe, the constellations, the Moon and Sun and the effect they have on the Oceans of Earth, and everyone the planet.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 8, 2008 at 3:04 AM
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Wonderfully done! I wish I understood the mechanics of horoscopy! My view is that it is BS!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 7, 2008 at 11:18 PM
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Re ladychardnnnay:
Thank you so much. I am honoured by your visit.
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 3:38 PM
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that was so soothing and felt like i do today - i wish i could write poetry
posted by
ladychardonnay
on November 7, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you so much Bill Enjoy the weekend!
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 2:52 PM
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Re: Sinome
My poems are a mixture of old and new. But like anyone else they are special to me and I enjoy sharing with others. Thanks Marta!
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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Re: Lovely and dream like quality!
Thanks for stopping by katray!
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 2:49 PM
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Re: A powerful piece here my friend
Thank you Maria. Have a great weekend in paradise!
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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/ Nice thoughts to sleep by *
posted by
BC-A
on November 7, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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Margaret this is fantastic, beautifully written and put together... Great job! I just love to read you and watch you grow as a poet, its such a thrill :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 7, 2008 at 12:48 PM
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Lovely and dream like quality!
Thank you for sharing, Merkie!..
posted by
Katray2
on November 7, 2008 at 12:40 PM
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A powerful piece here my friend
great phrasing; visual and poignant; superb indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 7, 2008 at 11:41 AM
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