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FROM .... 'I never used to be like this'... to the end was just superb! LOVE, LOVE the imagery!! 

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 19, 2009 at 3:15 AM | link to this | reply

Ok piece your are just venting don't force your gift let it flow you.
Poet up.

posted by Mystereo on December 14, 2008 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

I like the concluding with the onomatopoeia! sam

posted by sam444 on November 8, 2008 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on November 7, 2008 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

i have actually felt that way before - great post

posted by ladychardonnay on November 7, 2008 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply