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FROM .... 'I never used to be like this'... to the end was just superb! LOVE, LOVE the imagery!!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 19, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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Ok piece your are just venting don't force your gift let it flow you.
Poet up.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 14, 2008 at 5:37 AM
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I like the concluding with the onomatopoeia! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2008 at 1:55 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on November 7, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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i have actually felt that way before - great post
posted by
ladychardonnay
on November 7, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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