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Or is there a deeper place for love to start What an awesome close! I really thought these were outstanding rhyming couplets! Kusos! The cadence was just right as well, but the close was most stupendous! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 7, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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Love's waters often do run deep don't they
I often used to think I needed to be a submarine to really understand what women were all about.
posted by
malcolm
on November 7, 2008 at 9:15 AM
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Lovely. Life is a bundle of contradictions and complicated any which way you look at it.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 7, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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Beautiful Jefco... I loved this poem. Welcome back! I did not know you had return to us :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 6, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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