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Re: shamasehar
OH, Thanks shams!
posted by
merkie
on November 6, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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The smooth surface, the ripples, the pebbles..........oh! its simply beautiful.
posted by
shamasehar
on November 6, 2008 at 6:01 AM
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A piece of excellence my dear!
This truly is superb; an excellent take on the ripple effect and oh so true; bravo indeed! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 6, 2008 at 5:06 AM
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this is sooo clever. so little of each other do we actually see, as our surfaces we try and compose. it is beautiful, with a gentle ending. thank you.
posted by
rubypoem
on November 5, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Re: OTA
Thank you .I am glad you like this. A positive response means a gaol accomplished.
posted by
merkie
on November 5, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Re: hardilaziz
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
posted by
merkie
on November 5, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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Re: sam 444
Neat sam thanks The initial concept starts a story in the individual imagination How deep is that??
posted by
merkie
on November 5, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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Wonderful. The surface can be so deceptive. Truth, however, is hidden somewhere deep down.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 5, 2008 at 7:16 PM
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Oh, this is wonderful . I like all of the images it brings.. pebbles, ripples, face lines..very cool. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 5, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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Ah, the undertones, for what lies beneath could be demonstrative in nature! I like the imagery and the cadence and the congruity! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 5, 2008 at 4:13 PM
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Re: I like this..
Your poem reminded me of this .I was choosing a poem and thought this was agreeable to your self talk about judemental actions and thoughts.Thanks Lion,
for comment and inspiration!
posted by
merkie
on November 5, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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Re: Taps
Thank you Betty Life's joys are like the gemstones!
posted by
merkie
on November 5, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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I like this..
the surface does always seems so smooth, but often that is an illusion
posted by
lionreign
on November 5, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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Great! To walk along a clear stream and gather wet, shiny, colorful pebbles is one of life's joys.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 5, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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