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This one shows feeling and not just jibberish!
I sense yu are talking from within and that you've been in a great deal of turnoil. You've expressed it well. There is a lot of feeling in this one. Perhaps you should not tie your feelings onto what someone outside of yourself thinks of you. let yourself develop from within and take a good dose of self confidence. Its a long trail through life and none of us know when it will end nor how. Take some chances outside the usual track. Go walking and look for small beautiful things in nature. The world can be beautiful without mankind messing it all up.
posted by
michaudblaine
on November 29, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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this one caught my attention I pass until this one. Maybe you are a poet.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 21, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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Re: Sounds like a flight aboard your Cessna :)!! - Ash............One of
these days I will get rich enough to buy a Cessna and I will shuttle you from your home to your children and viceversa.......my dear friend......
posted by
Star5_
on November 4, 2008 at 6:02 PM
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Sounds like a flight aboard your Cessna :)!! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 4, 2008 at 5:29 PM
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for the picture you painted of the winds sweet voice, and the thousands stars, all our inner struggles can for a moment calm.tis certainly good for us to have you.
posted by
rubypoem
on November 4, 2008 at 3:43 AM
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You will be fine, go easy on yourself! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 3, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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posted by
yellowrose55
on November 3, 2008 at 8:33 PM
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Keep the passion always, Sue..'twill see you through..
Wonderful poem of heart and hope!...
posted by
Katray2
on November 3, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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