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...The sliver of moon there is,
looks on
regardless of her missing parts,
just like my heart,...
Very nice!
posted by
TAPS.
on November 3, 2008 at 4:48 PM
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Stunning imagery! My mind and heart get torn on ideas too! I let them jostle around in my brain and they make it to paper eventually! I don't know how I managed to get so far behind on reading your work. Love U a little
MORE Sammy!
posted by
sam444
on November 2, 2008 at 3:26 PM
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Lovely verses
with a very sad undertone I think...
posted by
malcolm
on November 1, 2008 at 12:19 PM
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So sweet, Marta. And ...I laughed so much about your comment on my silly emotiquation. Here is the answer: I just love inventing new words, particularly in a language which is not my mother tongue. Now, I had the word and needed to DO something with it.See where that leads....
posted by
vogue
on November 1, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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Do we ever tire of reading about true love? It seems as though we don't for
look at how people seem to enjoy the story of Wiley and Kabu. Anything you write is so beautiful one just has to read it over and over again.
posted by
Kabu
on November 1, 2008 at 7:07 AM
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But what about you?...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 1, 2008 at 12:28 AM
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Hi Princess, please, pls, pls write whatever your heart dictates; it dictate so beautifully that all your outpourigs touch us all deeply. And yes, the doc gave the good news that no further surgery would be required, but she will see me again on Oct 18th, and assess the improvement. I'm
and thank you gor your incessant prayers. From the now cool November desert sand xoxos to the ocen kissed ones.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 31, 2008 at 10:30 PM
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when all else fails, writing about the one we love never does..:)
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posted by
Rumor
on October 31, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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Sometimes too precious to share yet. Your heart pours forth love.Marta
posted by
merkie
on October 31, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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A poem
that holds more than just emotions
that remain untold
but well read,
loved it
posted by
Itza
on October 31, 2008 at 6:01 PM
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My heart could not have said it better
posted by
skye08
on October 31, 2008 at 5:08 PM
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..and when our hearts speak it is about you as well
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 31, 2008 at 3:42 PM
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Beautiful.....I wish I had someone in my life I felt this way about....
sigh...
posted by
Krisles
on October 31, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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A beautiful and silent poem ...
... with longing and ... the touch of sadness that makes it heartfelt - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 31, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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