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That is a great story Holly
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 31, 2008 at 1:54 PM
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hello
posted by
Star5_
on October 30, 2008 at 5:47 PM
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What a fantastic beginning! I did not expect the uncle to drive him away! I am with you all the way and horror is not great for me, but I will be damned if I will miss a word of this one! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 30, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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noooooooo
you can't say "to be continued"!!! Post the rest now!! LOL
seriously - I am hooked - gimme my fix 
posted by
lionreign
on October 30, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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Intriguing
I'll be back
posted by
malcolm
on October 30, 2008 at 12:16 PM
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Intriguing
I'll be
posted by
malcolm
on October 30, 2008 at 12:16 PM
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Intriguing
I'll
posted by
malcolm
on October 30, 2008 at 12:16 PM
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Ahhh, Luz, you certainly have my attention...
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posted by
Rumor
on October 30, 2008 at 12:03 PM
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Enjoyable horror ****
A good character development in David's work overcoming him and uncontrollably, taking on his own nephew. The timeframe before the Civil War adds a different conception of ghost stories. The Civil War itself inspires true ghost stories. But your fiction story offers a different experience for your readers love**** 
**** BCA **** Bill*s Wave**** Keep up the good work ****
posted by
BC-A
on October 30, 2008 at 10:00 AM
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Great stuff...
...the Civil War has always been a great fascination of mine...well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 29, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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Very good!!! loved it...hurry with part two! :-)
posted by
Sinome
on October 29, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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