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Very good work!
posted by
Katray2
on October 29, 2008 at 11:32 AM
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To all you fine and inspired poets I am so grateful for this community and the comments. Thank you all dear ones of my heart.
posted by
merkie
on October 28, 2008 at 1:19 PM
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I like all four
although it's the first one which captured my imagination most - beautiful work
posted by
lionreign
on October 28, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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four shorties from a major sweety - niice
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 28, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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Strong living through ...
... your poems ... you've felt it, experienced prints of them and ... acknowledged the truth of your words - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 28, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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Merkie
Some great pieces here… loved the branches “scratching and clawing”. A perfect visual.
posted by
Troosha
on October 28, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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I really liked these, merkie--especially the first one.
The second one reminded me of times where lots of bats zipped around where I was in the darkness. One of the places was when we were camping along Havasu Creek in the bottom of the Grand Canyon area and the bats came out of their holes in the rock cliffs. The other place was in the northern mountain area of Spain. We stayed in the little hamlet of Valdelavilla. The mountain cliffs there were dotted with bat caves and they would come out and zip around after dark. Scary!!!
posted by
TAPS.
on October 28, 2008 at 3:41 AM
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Wow...those were great. The last one a little sad but great.
posted by
Sinome
on October 27, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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