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Krislis
GREAT really great. I love this. Keep it up. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on October 31, 2008 at 2:03 AM
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Wow...my hat is off to you...really well done and full of meaning, which some of these poetic challenges loose in the effort for metric perfection. You kept both brilliantly, the content and the measure Excellent job!
posted by
Sinome
on October 30, 2008 at 7:58 PM
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Bravo!!!
This is riveting! Clever and talented write - well done!
posted by
lionreign
on October 29, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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Very deligthful! I love a good poetic challenge! Well done indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 28, 2008 at 5:56 PM
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Krisles
This must have presented a personal challenge… but the outcome is fabulous. I liked the reoccurring voice of “choose me”.
posted by
Troosha
on October 28, 2008 at 1:50 PM
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Great write I really enjoyed following your choices. Wisdom in learning.You are on the right path!
posted by
merkie
on October 28, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Great form. Fun read. You are so good at that.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 28, 2008 at 1:29 AM
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