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such feeling
such feeling and honesty, they are two lucky boys.
posted by
spiderfly
on October 26, 2008 at 12:15 AM
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback. My heart is pleased, to know that so many people have connected with this poem.
posted by
godsome
on October 22, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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the dynamics of your every word my dear are priceless for the two young boys to be so proud to have a father in you. I'm blown away of this piece.... you write in excellent flow and continuity. Great job!!!!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 22, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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Thank you sam. This one flowed deep from within my heart for the love of my boys when I wrote it. I am pleased to see I was able to convey it.
posted by
godsome
on October 22, 2008 at 8:48 AM
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Thank you Kent. This is one of my own favorites.
posted by
godsome
on October 22, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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I so delighted in this poem. It demonstrates great love! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 22, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, THNAKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 21, 2008 at 2:53 PM
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There is nothing like the love for your children :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 21, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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