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Aggrivate the wound and then talk. I like it! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 21, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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There's something I like about this poem, but I can't name it!
posted by
Straightforward
on October 21, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Luz, a genuinely honest chit chat does hurt at times, but it's usually
worth it.
..
(but then there are times when we think talking is the answer, and it probably still is, but our timing isn't right)
posted by
Rumor
on October 21, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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...absolutely!
...if the world would just sit down and talk... they might just find out how similar we all are... and that we're all one...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on October 20, 2008 at 11:52 PM
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unique
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 20, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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THanks, Bhaskar!!
'alienating beauty'. i like that.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 20, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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Luz
" ... expect writhing flesh to retaliate with t he process of healing over the hand against it. Let us aggravate the wound! Let us talk!". Anger, frustrationm passion, and the balm of healing in "Let us talk", presented with an alienated beauty. BRAVO! 
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 20, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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