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Flow of thoughts
I like the way you wrtoe this entry... it is like a stream... water flwoing through... going down and around rocks and what have you... but it's flowing...not caring whether it sounds good or looks nice... it's natural... wonderfully natural...
posted by
1AMIHAN1
on October 19, 2008 at 4:33 AM
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doo doo
I was kind of surprise by the first half of the piece because you sounded so positive – appreciating and enjoying some silence but then you decided “all is lost”. Umm…
posted by
Troosha
on October 18, 2008 at 7:41 AM
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