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Amazing! Deep insight for you wrote this before you got a shot. Poet up!

posted by Mystereo on December 18, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

You are really, really upset and I find it very good how you let it all out, fresh from the wound so to speak. A great way to write poetry.

posted by vogue on October 18, 2008 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry to learn this, and what poignant imagery as well. sam

posted by sam444 on October 18, 2008 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on October 17, 2008 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Mojo
I remember that feeling well.  It sucks.  But it passes.....

posted by Troosha on October 17, 2008 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply