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Master Piece for self knowledge but, really the oppressor is our true self,
posted by
Mystereo
on December 18, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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don't lose that 10
Hope you haven't lost that 10 year old child in you... hope he still hops to adventures... hope he still loves the rain... hope he still cries when it's painful... hope he still laughs til he caughs... for that 10 year old in you who wrote this piece... knows... minus the glitters and neon lights... he simply knows...
posted by
1AMIHAN1
on October 21, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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thank you
i honestly wrote this when i was in the fifth grade. i thinki would have been like 10.
posted by
MojoRisen
on October 17, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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Sad realization but it can be mended. I enjoyed the cadence and the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 16, 2008 at 7:12 PM
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