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posted by
Star5_
on November 2, 2008 at 4:04 AM
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Damn, sis...
You rock. You know that, right?
posted by
strat
on October 18, 2008 at 5:24 PM
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It's an
"epic" haiku??? A "Serial" haiku???
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on October 17, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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Fun, fun! I love your poems.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 17, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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Now I really do feel relaxed. Well done!
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 17, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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Hi my dear fellow lunatic. Let's stretch and butttaaahhhh to the very end.
posted by
vogue
on October 17, 2008 at 9:04 AM
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Krisles
I was right there with ya - cat draped on a limb – and then you threw a little humour at me. Great write!
posted by
Troosha
on October 17, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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Very nicely done.....
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 16, 2008 at 11:49 PM
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I want to stretch and relax with you. Super ending!
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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Krisles
Just before I read this I had planned to get up and make myself a drink - but now all I want is sit here, relaxed, read it again and savor it...And thanks for your Thanksgiving greetings...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 16, 2008 at 6:32 PM
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The close was too precious! I like this format that you use! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 16, 2008 at 9:06 AM
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Okay then....
waiting for the next one...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 15, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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BEautifully done! Loved this one... I almost relaxed with you there :-) Great one!
posted by
Sinome
on October 15, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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