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Re: Merkie
Thank you Troosha.
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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Merkie
I loved the analogy of a woman changing her clothes in the first poem – very creative, very clever! 
posted by
Troosha
on October 16, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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Re: BC-A
I like to paint too ,Watercolors mostly. Colors are a vivid medium of expression and sometimes easier to understand than vocabulary. Thanks for the visit Bill.
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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Re: Breathtaking - both of them my friend!
Thank you mariaki . I have written many Autumn poems over the writing span and this is a favourite.I feast on the colors and fresh sunny days.
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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Re: Very good
Much gratitude for your welcome feedback. Thanks for the check for typing errors. I will fix it.
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Re: Well done!
Thankyou Teddy Poet.
posted by
merkie
on October 16, 2008 at 10:54 AM
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You use color effectively in relation to the language*** w/TLC, BCA *** bILL*S wAVE*** Blog on ***
posted by
BC-A
on October 16, 2008 at 9:02 AM
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Breathtaking - both of them my friend!
A wonderful pair! I especially enjoyed the first one - such a vivid description; many blessings and thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on October 16, 2008 at 4:06 AM
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Very good
Clever image in the first poem excellently executed, I thoroughly enjoyed that.
should that be "breath of winter", by the way?
the second poem bowled me right over - I love it more than I can say:
"Pristine Love unfolds wisdom"
is my favourite line so far this week!
posted by
lionreign
on October 16, 2008 at 2:25 AM
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Well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 15, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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Re: Riversidepoet.
It might get blue in the face if it holds the breath too long! Awhile is good though. Thanks Kent!
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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Re: Taps
You just did a fine reverant job here. Your pictures tell us the same thing.Thanks Taps
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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Re: Thanks for sharing...
Thanks for reading and your kind words.
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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Re: sam444
Come on in sam,i'mglad you came! Thanks for visiting,come again! lol
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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Hey! I hear your door is open and so I have come to say I really enjoyed these poems! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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THE BREATH OF WINTER, I HOPE SHE HOLDS IT FOR AWHILE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 15, 2008 at 2:41 PM
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merkie, no matter how I try, it is hard for me to describe my reverant and delighted feelings to see the seasons ever changing from one beauty into another
posted by
TAPS.
on October 15, 2008 at 2:31 PM
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Thanks for sharing...
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 15, 2008 at 12:23 PM
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