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Great write.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 28, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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Speechless.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 21, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Awesome as always...Where have you been?
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 14, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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wow sending shivers down my spin! Dear!
I always love poetry! Sorry I havnt been around to read much of it latly. Will soon enough!
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on November 25, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 21, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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truck loads of fun
posted by
poetperson
on October 19, 2008 at 6:13 PM
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the fire stained chimneys wild children thrown balls flows the creek flow
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 17, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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Gripping
i absolutely love this one. your word choices and message appealed very strongly to me! your entries just keep getting better and better!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 16, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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I see this is a continuation of the last poem and my understanding is enhanced by reading both. I like the line of the misscarriage of justice etc. Good comment on the stressed world of forever.
posted by
merkie
on October 14, 2008 at 3:09 PM
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