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thanks again, everyone!

posted by Luz_Briar on October 14, 2008 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Right on: A solace of nuance withstanding sam

posted by sam444 on October 13, 2008 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome!!!
This is great!!!

I loved these lines:

 

Leaking

With its rhythm of old fathomed

Fear

posted by lionreign on October 13, 2008 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

work and expression well done
I am not familiar with this style but goodness it is clever

posted by mysteria on October 13, 2008 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on October 13, 2008 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Luz
The word “no” - self-spoken or spoken by others can certain create havoc with our search for fulfillment…. Interesting piece! 

posted by Troosha on October 13, 2008 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply