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Re: Smittenheimer
Much appreciation,Thank you.

posted by merkie on October 9, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie,  This is so thought provoking and mysterious.  Just the way we like it.

posted by Smittenheimer on October 9, 2008 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: They blend perfectly into the ultimate close my friend!
Maria, thankyou so much for your welcome visit and review!

posted by merkie on October 8, 2008 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie
Will you join me Troosha or are you ahead of me waitng? Always heading home.Thank you  my dear!

posted by merkie on October 8, 2008 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: such beautiful sadnesses
Bless you lion and thanks.

posted by merkie on October 8, 2008 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very lovely and connecting works..
Thanks katray. Much appreciated comment!

posted by merkie on October 8, 2008 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: yellowrose
Thanks Vicky!

posted by merkie on October 8, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Very lovely and connecting works..

posted by Katray2 on October 8, 2008 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

such beautiful sadnesses
gorgeous facets of melancholy - well done

posted by lionreign on October 8, 2008 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie
I confess I’m not sure I saw a yin and yang in the two pieces as both possessed an element of sadness.  Envision dreams, however, offered a sense of hope rising with its closing line of All foot steps turn to home Will you join me?  Great line!

posted by Troosha on October 8, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

They blend perfectly into the ultimate close my friend!
great presentation; very well done; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on October 8, 2008 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

WOW . . . I love this merkie, heartbreaking though.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 7, 2008 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Shelly
Thank you. Variety of interests we share!

posted by merkie on October 7, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

I thought paradoxical when I first read. Then to indecision and finally an eerieness comfort that all is going to be okay! It was a sublime effect for me as well. I love this approach! Well scripted indeed! Shelly

posted by sam444 on October 7, 2008 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent! you are very good
Thank you Mike.

posted by merkie on October 7, 2008 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thank you sinome my dear! There are so many things to share I thought I would post two together. The muse likes to write about sweet love but it is not always so.

posted by merkie on October 7, 2008 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent! you are very good

posted by muley12 on October 7, 2008 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

A really unique aproach...  contradictory themes...or was it that contradiction the unifying thought?  for after all dreams of love and sadness for love lost... they kind of go together.  In any case  they are both beautiful Merkie,  well written and wonderful.

posted by Sinome on October 7, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply