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So well done doo doo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 6, 2008 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

 A clever play on words and form *** bw/TLC, BCA *** Bill's Wave*** Blog on!

posted by BC-A on October 6, 2008 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

I often think
that there's nothing new to discover - apart from your poetry of course! I enjoyed the style.

posted by malcolm on October 6, 2008 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

coooooool

posted by Star5_ on October 6, 2008 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Actually I also like the poetry ... and the presentation I guess is making a point, its uniquly yours and that makes you different .   In poetry it is good to be different. Good job!

posted by Sinome on October 5, 2008 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

i really like your poetry it makes me laugh

posted by NIGHTWRITE on October 5, 2008 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

We can - hide? Unique thoughts here. Or we can - run? Or Shine?

posted by yellowrose55 on October 5, 2008 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply