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excellent read!
I enjoyed the mystery you created and then surprised us all with the ending! Well Done!!
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on October 6, 2008 at 3:44 PM
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vogue, were you taking pictures of me that night?..lol
This sounds like something I would do...
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posted by
Rumor
on October 6, 2008 at 3:36 PM
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A great story my friend!
very well written and a joy to read! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 6, 2008 at 1:56 AM
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That's true vogue, what was said about your creating a hope in the reader,
for the safety and success of the window opener.....excellent creativity.
posted by
benzinha
on October 5, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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This is fantastic! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 5, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Wow Vogue this is really good!!! loved the suspense and the surprise ending. No wonder you are RUNNER UP!!!!!!!!! Congratulations!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on October 5, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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Re: Vogue
Because, like me, you have a heart for nuts!!!
posted by
vogue
on October 5, 2008 at 5:42 AM
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Vogue
Neat! Very well done! Why, by the way, was I hoping he wouldn't get caught???
posted by
Nautikos
on October 5, 2008 at 5:33 AM
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Loved reading the story; congratulations! Look forward to more.
posted by
Nita09
on October 5, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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Cute. I used to write these as a receptionist at a t.v. station. I should
have been doing other things, but there were no other duties, until they put me in commercial traffic. The other day I found aobut six of them. Mine are dumb and very 60s.
This one was really cute.
posted by
benzinha
on October 5, 2008 at 2:06 AM
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