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Master Piece for change in humans, you are what life needs open minded!

posted by Mystereo on December 14, 2008 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent - ExTurpi - very inpirational

posted by Smittenheimer on October 31, 2008 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

nice! especially the final line

posted by Luz_Briar on October 20, 2008 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Great, EX_TURPI.  Well done!

posted by TAPS. on October 17, 2008 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

What lovely thoughts, and beautifully written---really enjoyed it; thanks!

posted by Nita09 on October 10, 2008 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

great last stanza!

posted by Jack_Shackleton on October 9, 2008 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

so much packed into these lines, I will read this one again..

posted by Blue_feathers on October 7, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

I adore this poem! You write very well. sam

posted by sam444 on October 5, 2008 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

Brilliant observations, particularly about the beauty of evil. The devil is after all a fallen angel, its only the actions which make evil.... evil!

posted by vogue on October 5, 2008 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply

Evil is beauty if its lessons we take. - This is so true, still, some never learn.

posted by Brickhouse on October 4, 2008 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

You’re on par with the other, every one of you. This is a grand finale to this poem! Thanks for sharing.

posted by merkie on October 4, 2008 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

I could hear this as a song

posted by Lanetay on October 4, 2008 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent poem!  I love the unifying theme and the rhythm that runs through it giving it almost a musical sound.  Great job!

posted by Sinome on October 4, 2008 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply