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Tend to agree with Sam, while the rain and the smell of damp leaves is for me a very personal, and not the most comfortable, has me sitting on the edge of my seat.
posted by
jfm32
on October 5, 2008 at 4:16 PM
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A beautiful and thoughtful ...
... poem for the autumn life ... it's the first signs of the old to disappear, as a sadness but, at the same time as the law of the nature ... and then it's right - the spring will come ... 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 5, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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I love the rain
posted by
Lanetay
on October 5, 2008 at 10:39 AM
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Good morning my darlin' Sinome! This is such exquisite imagery. I was enthralled to the maximum. Even though there was rain it did not put a damper on the glorious colors and depiction of Autumn. Having the ocean in there gave it such impetus. It is filled with varying waters and for me there is so much rain in the desert in the fall that it is a soothing balm for me. I love how your imagery sends me to others places as well. sam loves you!
posted by
sam444
on October 5, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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I guess they've said it all my dear...if there's anything i might just add is for you to stay with such gentle and endearing heart which comes out in your wonderful poetry my dear one...Bless you....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 5, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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A passion filled heart and a stirred up mind are such important things for a writer to possess. Yours are very apparent to the readers of your poems.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 5, 2008 at 6:53 AM
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Not only do I love this melancholic poem which really really talks to me but also the quote of one of my favorite poets of all times. I do remember the first line however as: il pleure dans mon coer comme il pleut dans la rue?? It doesn't make any difference and probably my memory is failing me, but I don't have a book at hand to look it up. Thanks for your lovely comment on "The Deal". Can we have you for president please, then I would get citizenship.
posted by
vogue
on October 4, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Sinome
I love your poetry. It is beautiful, compelling and well done.
posted by
Justi
on October 4, 2008 at 9:01 PM
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Sinome
You made my own autumn blues a little less depressing...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 4, 2008 at 5:11 PM
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YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF TAKING ME THERE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 4, 2008 at 4:56 PM
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You add color to the blues. Lovely oceanscape even in the rain,
posted by
merkie
on October 4, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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Metaphoric realism!! You do it well.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 4, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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You've made rain beautiful. Thanks for stopping in on my blog and thanks for your holiday wishes!
posted by
gapcohen
on October 4, 2008 at 1:29 PM
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As always excellent
I love the pictures you created
posted by
skye08
on October 4, 2008 at 1:06 PM
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