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Sinome this is just incredible! I was so entranced with the key I did not anticipate the door being gone. This is stunningly superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 3, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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Wow.Quite an ending here. You've got me stirred . . . . I have so much catching up to do - I've
missed out on a lot of your poetry lately. Will find time to go back a little.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 3, 2008 at 9:01 PM
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Wonderful setup and delivery. I even like the metaphysics. Ever consider being your own straight man?
posted by
jfm32
on October 3, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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Sinome
We sometimes think there’s a door – even wish for the key – but as your piece concludes we ultimately realize there is no door (perhaps its one of those revolving doors. They don’t require a key – just a simple push). 
posted by
Troosha
on October 3, 2008 at 7:09 AM
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FIND A NEW KEY, MAY GOD BLESS, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 3, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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Sometimes there is no need for a key my dear Sinome.....
the unseen door opens automatically; many blessings and thanks and have a wonderful weekend
posted by
mariaki
on October 3, 2008 at 5:12 AM
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Changing your thoughts can change your reality
beautifully done
posted by
skye08
on October 3, 2008 at 4:11 AM
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Fantastic work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 2, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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