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Re: Sam
Thanks - Glad this one worked... I was deliberately playing with things a little...
posted by
lionreign
on October 4, 2008 at 6:50 AM
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Magical and I could se the dream so vividly! I especially liked the refrain and the subtle change with the insertion of anew and powerful word! Great! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 3, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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Re: Another beauty my friend!
Thank you, dear friend, and of course I am! How could I not be enchanted with his creative genius, even on days when I am not enamoured of the story his gift for description and poetry remains an inspiration
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:50 AM
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Re: Merkie
shhhhh don't tell everyone! Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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Re: cute and lovely
Thanks Luz! I am glad it worked
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks...glad it paid off, I know that it often doesn't, but I am in the mood for risks
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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Re: nice love poem.
Thanks FYS, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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Re: Riverside poet
Thank you Kent
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:35 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2008 at 6:35 AM
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Another beauty my friend!
And a Tolkien fan to boot! Have a super weekend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 3, 2008 at 3:26 AM
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You are tenderheated and most romantic. Sweet dreams my friend!
posted by
merkie
on October 2, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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cute and lovely
i agree with BC-A, the repetition really works wonders here
posted by
Luz_Briar
on October 2, 2008 at 3:15 PM
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The structure of your poem shows your sincerity creatively through repetition. Usually I don’t recommend it in poetry. However it works for you here*** w/ TLC, BCA, Bill’s Wave*** Blog on!
posted by
BC-A
on October 2, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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nice love poem.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 2, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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VERY NICE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 2, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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Lion
"my reality is shining from your eyes"... Anyone in love, I mean truly in love, can appreciate this line!
posted by
Troosha
on October 2, 2008 at 7:14 AM
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