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Thank you so much for the feedback! It is so motivating to hear from other writers that my message was conveyed and understood. Thank you so much.
posted by
godsome
on October 16, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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I wouldn't apoligize, I would simply move forward! I like the imagery you created! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 2, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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FaneXe
I read your “About me” page and it says you write when emotion strikes. I think this is true of most people who tackle poetry – sometimes a perfectly constructed poem (with form and a rhyming scheme) and other times it can simply be a free flow of thoughts or emotions. In this piece you have expressed your frustration about being pushed away very methodically and your sadness comes through. For me, if a thought or emotion is conveyed so that your reader comes away with an understanding of what is being shared then the piece is successful (but that’s just me, of course). 
posted by
Troosha
on October 2, 2008 at 7:12 AM
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