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I liked the poignant ending for it does start inside! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 30, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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Hi Luz,
I especially liked this Its justice, its crime.
The rot starts
From the insides!
G R E A T !
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 30, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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different but very good
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on September 29, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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"Before It" is the typical tangent about how every up has its down, and so and so on. Hope you enjoyed!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 29, 2008 at 5:41 PM
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