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posted by
Star5_
on September 24, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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You make me think of the sister I lost can it really be three years ago
already. Sometimes the guilt of living on while she sleeps just overwhelms me.
posted by
Kabu
on September 24, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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The Autumn permeates the season with sadness as the rain returns to cool the way for change. Sometimes we need to pause and savour the change in sadness before the sunrise calls cheer forth once again. beautiful writing sinome.
images of golden & russet leaves!
posted by
merkie
on September 24, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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thank you for you a poet
posted by
lestate7
on September 24, 2008 at 4:13 PM
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I so adore your imagery. It is bitter-sweet but it is still a soothing aroma for me. sam
posted by
sam444
on September 24, 2008 at 4:10 PM
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Highly positive and inspiring ....
posted by
afzal50
on September 24, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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beautiful!
posted by
Star5_
on September 24, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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AGAIN
WHAT A PAINTING YOU PAINT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 24, 2008 at 10:50 AM
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Sinome
Awww... if this is truly the thoughts your are experiencing as autumn settles it, it's very sad. But then, we as poets, can simply take liberties so you may have used the onset of a new season (a season which typically resonates of sorrow or summer moments dying) to explore a darkened mood. Either way - another grand piece!
posted by
Troosha
on September 24, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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So bitter sweet. Still, one has to believe in another sun.
posted by
vogue
on September 24, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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Good imagery
a very well written and melancholy piece
posted by
lionreign
on September 24, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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very interesting idea of the autum and love
posted by
Lanetay
on September 24, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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Death and re-birth my dear Sinome
an absolute necessity if we are to learn and grow; many blessings my friend and thanks for sharing this superb piece
posted by
mariaki
on September 24, 2008 at 5:27 AM
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i have missed you my beloved one...i love the transition in your pages my dear...and you seem to have found an even better drive and inspiration with your writings. They are awesome and amazing works. Bravo my dear...i'm so proud of you!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on September 24, 2008 at 5:24 AM
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Sinome, Don't give up on the smiles. Smiles make anything and everything easier and better. Ones emotions, attitudes, follow the smiles to the high road.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 23, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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"Reach for something new" . . . . beautiful. And then the pain will subside. Love and pain
do stand beside each other sometimes. Love "Again".
posted by
yellowrose55
on September 23, 2008 at 10:29 PM
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