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It sure is hard when you sell your home. Not only are you packing up household goods, you have to pack the memories up too.
posted by
Brickhouse
on September 24, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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Tina, this is beautiful
posted by
Smittenheimer
on September 24, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Wow! this is a great depiction of longing! I adore the imagery, the cadence was very smooth. I am sorry I am behind; I am moving and getting my house ready for sale. I keep up as much as I can until this is settled! Thanks, sam
posted by
sam444
on September 24, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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Such a sad longing
for a love long gone
and yet still here.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on September 22, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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very moving. kent
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 22, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments, it encourages me to write more.
posted by
Brickhouse
on September 21, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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you write so well..
posted by
Star5_
on September 20, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Beautiful poem and so sad... I know what to miss someone is like and you have captured that deep longing so well. Excellent work
posted by
Sinome
on September 20, 2008 at 3:40 PM
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Sad, beautiful, and somethinig all too t rue for us all. 
joe
posted by
LongoGeremia
on September 20, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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