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thank you for reading my friends, my kids got some misunderstandings with
me and I had faced few horrible days......so my mind was bleeding whn I wrote....I couldn't believe some words came from their mouth.......but everything ok.....still it hurts.....
posted by
Star5_
on September 23, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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begging is painful to read
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 23, 2008 at 1:05 PM
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I felt the pain through your words. Please, don't cry.
posted by
vogue
on September 23, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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beautiful and so sad one of the most touching things I've read
posted by
zapoet73
on September 23, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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Re: This piece feels so genuine: Because it's real feelings....
posted by
Star5_
on September 21, 2008 at 4:28 PM
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Crying sometimes soothes the soul, for others a release of strong emotions rather than words. You write these words in a way that makes a person feel your pain. Great job.
posted by
Brickhouse
on September 21, 2008 at 3:36 PM
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This piece feels so genuine
very nice work
posted by
lionreign
on September 21, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Your writing comes straight from the heart.
posted by
Nita09
on September 20, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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hahaha.........haha
posted by
Star5_
on September 19, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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Re:
THANKS SMITTEN!
posted by
Star5_
on September 19, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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I love this -
beats in tune with yours
posted by
Smittenheimer
on September 19, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Hey, smile Sunday is almost here ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~sam
posted by
sam444
on September 19, 2008 at 1:30 PM
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Pain leads to growth....
this is a period of growth for all your family...in a couple of years you'll all come out better persons...pray daily, and keep solid faith in the Divine will that constantly guides every soul on life's journey...best, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on September 19, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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Re: thank you kent!
posted by
Star5_
on September 18, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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kids are on a ride....I pray god to give the wisdom to them and patience to
me
posted by
Star5_
on September 18, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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Good poem! I am with Kent in this...you shouldn't cry... many people love you. ... but the only one that can stop you from crying is yourself :-) there is nothing to cry about sweetie, you are a beautiful , talented lucky mommy and life is just beginning for you. Smile and you will see the world smiles with you.... or so they say
. xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 18, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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PLEASE DON'T CRY, GOD LOVES YOU AND SO DO I. KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 18, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Don't, Don't , Don't let me cry please.....
posted by
Star5_
on September 18, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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