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I loved what Sinome said. But this is a great line (I adored the close too): Can't go any deeper into your Scream Play!!!!!!!! I love an awesome play on words. BRAVO!!!!! sam
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sam444
on September 19, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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Excellent! Loved the concept and the flow of this poem. It conveys a deep truth... "hurt me once...shame on you...but hurt me twice, shame on me" So many of us get trapped into situations where we are just repeating the same mistakes over and over again because we refuse to see what is happening. There comes a moment one has to stop loss and walk away, even if we brake our heart to do it. Your poem is right to the point and truly great.
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Sinome
on September 18, 2008 at 8:33 PM
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