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This is beautiful, Sinome. It makes one feel peaceful and content.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 17, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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Marvellous piece my dear Sinome!
True love quietly waiting in the wings but always there; beautifully written my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 17, 2008 at 5:53 AM
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Trust yourself and trust your heart .......Very true !
posted by
afzal50
on September 17, 2008 at 5:05 AM
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I love your word play with color and texture love ~ Blog on! BCA, Bill’s Wave
posted by
BC-A
on September 16, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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This is so uplifitng and came just at the right moment for me. I feel very very low and thought I might just read a few posts to cheer me up and...happened upon this particular poem.
posted by
vogue
on September 16, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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Hey sweetie! I am so sorry I am behind. It is me now. Moving is tiring. I am saying hello and will be back in the morning to leave my thoughts. I will get that email answered too! Love to you. sam
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Sinome
How wonderful, and so very true luv.
"Love can seem lost, but if true, its never far,
the right person for you might be right there.
Trust yourself and trust your heart,
it will show you the way back to where you were ...."
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 16, 2008 at 9:01 PM
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So sad for me to read I spent so many years alone in a crowd.
posted by
Kabu
on September 16, 2008 at 8:12 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 16, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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"Love can seem lost, but if true, its never far," ~ i can attest to this ~ ~ what a truly touching poem...as a tribute to one so loved. I am on briefly tonight Marta and want to thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I miss you too ~ Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on September 16, 2008 at 6:12 PM
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I love the idea that love is never lost forever, it's just hiding sometimes.
posted by
LillyHobbs
on September 16, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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very nice, and very true. kent
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 16, 2008 at 4:33 PM
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Sinome
To believe in oneself and by extension believe we are “loveable”, is the only way to maneuver our way through life’s ups and downs. For some reason a song by Seal came to mind as I read this or more specifically a line from that song; “Love will help me know my name”…..
posted by
Troosha
on September 16, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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Beautiful sinome .the flow of words carries you from sadness to hope. Excellent.
posted by
merkie
on September 16, 2008 at 3:47 PM
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Maybe just my feeling, but feel you are reaching into amazing work. and I especially like the stride...a painter in her internal rhythm, painting in broad strokes the visions of the concrete. Was a little surprised by last line. Was expecting: "it will show you back to where you are."
Hi, John
posted by
jfm32
on September 16, 2008 at 3:41 PM
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