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WoW!
posted by
Star5_
on September 16, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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Luz Briar
Lots of drama there luv, sounds kind of like religion run amok
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 15, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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Lionreign, Sammy, and Mysteria
Thanks so much for reading and the flattering comments!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 15, 2008 at 7:06 PM
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i could see the banner of deceit waving as I read this...
the same banner that lies to all of us....
ps thank you for saving the doGGie...
posted by
mysteria
on September 15, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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It is a fine dramatic monlogue! It carries much impetus! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 15, 2008 at 6:46 AM
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speachless
I knew from your prose and poetry before this that you were good but, Luz, this is truly great. You show power and passion executed with an ability rarely seen outside Shakespeare. After reading this I sat in silence for several minutes, stunned and with hackles raised.
Bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2008 at 2:54 AM
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Deconstruction
mostly about leaders who use cult/religion to manipulate, breakdown, and ultimately rebuild followers.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 14, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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