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Nice! Black birds golden seeds or somthing like that.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 15, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Naut
They say blackbirds are magic.. may they bring you magic moments as you have us with your haiku.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 13, 2008 at 4:16 AM
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You paint this picture very well.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 10, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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Kabu is right. It takes talent to give such a clear picture of autumn in three lines. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on September 21, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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I love blackbirds - they call them grackles down here
posted by
Smittenheimer
on September 17, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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Naut, well done! I'm more than ready for fall, and for more haiku or
other types of poetry from you..
..
posted by
Rumor
on September 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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I told you in person that you do this well and you do. This is quite
special. What three lines and I have a completed picture. Now that takes talent.
posted by
Kabu
on September 16, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Krisles, I'm really glad you enjoyed this!
posted by
Nautikos
on September 15, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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Thanks, merkie!
posted by
Nautikos
on September 15, 2008 at 6:51 AM
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Nautikos
Today, thanks to Ike, the temp was in the 80's and I reveled in the coolness.....and the feeling that Fall would soon be here.....my favorite season. How wonderful to log on and find this beautiful haiku and wrap myself in even more of the feeling.....someone was right, you really should write more of these.....well, I wish you would; I hardly ever get to write, but I do read and I need something to look forward to
posted by
Krisles
on September 14, 2008 at 6:25 PM
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marvellous images Thanks.
posted by
merkie
on September 12, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Thanks, TAPS! I am hugely delighted if my poetry elicits pleasant memories...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2008 at 5:53 PM
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Thanks, Auslander! I'm never quite sure about this stuff, but I'm glad if people enjoy it...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2008 at 5:51 PM
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Thanks, Shelly! I am delighted to have you promote me...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2008 at 5:47 PM
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Re: Naut
Thanks, Troosh! I really appreciate the approval of a
real poet...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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Nautikos, a sunny day not long ago, on a walk near a small lake, I startled a flock of
red-wing blackbirds in the midst of a bed of cattails at lake's edge. They rose as one,
sounding a chorus of protest, but returning and settling in to their business after I passed.
Your haiku made me remember the incident.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 12, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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Short and sweet! I like it!
posted by
auslander
on September 12, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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I love this Haiku! May I promote it at my blog my bro? I am taking info now! Thanks! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on September 12, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Naut
You should do more of these - you're
very good at it.
posted by
Troosha
on September 12, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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