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You can write poetry! This is an excellent close:

A  crippled  heart once made of steel.

 

A stunned soul that can no longer feel.

 

Superb!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 13, 2008 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by merkie on September 12, 2008 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautifully written!

THANK YOU for readiing me.

joe

posted by LongoGeremia on September 12, 2008 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written!

posted by tyleness on September 12, 2008 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re:

THANK YOU !

Joe

posted by LongoGeremia on September 11, 2008 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

that my friend was simiply awesome!!!!

posted by RITE2SPIN on September 11, 2008 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply