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Thanks so much . I hope this is a challenge to you also! Did you notice that each line is the sum of the syllable count in the previous two? 1,1, 2,3,5,8,13,21. Have fun and a super day Merkie

posted by merkie on September 10, 2008 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

I love it, your formula is great!

posted by LillyHobbs on September 10, 2008 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic
Fantastically done thank you

posted by starday on September 10, 2008 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

You should be very proud my dear
this could have been written by a master and who knows maybe it has............ Superb! Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on September 10, 2008 at 3:57 AM | link to this | reply

I am in awe
This is so fantastic!  This one gets printed and put on my wall for a while - great poem 

posted by lionreign on September 10, 2008 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

Simply beautiful....what lovely pictures!

posted by Nita09 on September 10, 2008 at 1:24 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery.  I liked the structure; maybe I'll try one...

posted by Marineair on September 10, 2008 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work, Merkie!
 

posted by Katray2 on September 9, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome! I am so proud of you! I love the message, imagery and layout! BRAVO!!!!!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 9, 2008 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

I like that description of the change of seasons

posted by Lanetay on September 9, 2008 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

Provide us with
 color for the season love!

posted by BC-A on September 9, 2008 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

Very well done

posted by Kayzzaman on September 9, 2008 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Well done!

posted by TAPS. on September 9, 2008 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

Your words of summer through Autumn are so lovely and soothing.FlowerTree

posted by yellowrose55 on September 9, 2008 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply