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sounds like a whole lotta shakin going on!

posted by RITE2SPIN on September 7, 2008 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

Cool! I like the rythm

posted by Lotus_Flower on September 7, 2008 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful

posted by Kayzzaman on September 7, 2008 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!  I love the implications of this very well written poem... Yes you are making love...but he might just be the catalyst that awakens your sexuality to bigger and better things?  Go girl!  That is the ticket  :-)

posted by Sinome on September 7, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply