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Soul Builder 101 This should read thank you very much
posted by
merkie
on September 6, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Re: Soul Builder101
Tahan you very much. 'til next time take care
posted by
merkie
on September 6, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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Re: jfm32
Always thinking but not always about poems. LOL Thank you for reading and your positive comments. I think short poems are easy to read but I will post a longer one just for you. The Song of The Whispering Breeze. I hope you will like it. Let me know.
posted by
merkie
on September 6, 2008 at 7:24 PM
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Very impressive reading!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 6, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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Liked your insight (so ok, you touched me) Also like your rhythm
and brevity of style and how you aim for and bring home the intention of a compact thought while (seemingly) inadvertantly revealing it...have you been thinking about longer poems?
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jfm32
on September 6, 2008 at 12:49 PM
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